Excerpt: Spirit of Water

Did you ever wonder how Shaun took so much damage in Memory of Water but still kept going? Here’s a work-in-progress excerpt from Spirit of Water that sheds light on just that.

“Pay [Cate's] words no heed,” I say. “You’ll learn nothing good from her. You’d be better off back in Orkney with Maggs if you want to learn kindness.”

Shaun grunts in disgust. “She’s the one who stopped anyone from telling Leven the truth about him, yes?”

“She did what she thought was right in order to protect him,” I say, and then nod in Lorcan’s direction. “As did you.”

Shaun considers this and nods his head. “Point taken. Besides, without Mommy Dearest, Beth wouldn’t have any powers.”

“Neither would you,” I reply.

“I don’t have powers,” he says. “I’m all too aware of that.”

I look him up and down. “How’re you feeling?”

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Flash fiction: First Day

I wrote the following back in 2007, along with an outline of the rest of the story. My memory stick is full of stories in their infancy and I go back from time to time to see how they’re doing. This one doesn’t end well because it’s a tale of the destructive power of obsession.

First Day

Two months ago, I tried slipping into MidTech’s New Employee Orientaion conference unnoticed. I wanted to have made a better first impression but, already thirty minutes late, I interrupted proceedings by falling through the door, my briefcase, jacket, and coffee flying from my hands.

Heart racing, I recovered my things in the darkness and found an empty seat, conscious of the electronic eyes tracking every clumsy move I made. The android presenter was tastefully lit and stood to the left of an illuminated display. She had a singularly Asian face.

“Welcome to MidTech,” she cooed. “We’re glad you could join us.” There was no sarcasm in her sweet voice, being programmed to put people at ease.

“I’m so sorry I’m l-late,” I said. “I’m new to City Seven and I haven’t quite got the hang of the layout.”

“Please, no need to apologise,” she said and transmitted a navigation routine to my PDA.

The induction presentation passed quickly enough. MidTech had hand-picked and headhunted both myself and the five others in the room to work on an exciting new artificial intelligence project. We were each given data to review before our first full day of work tomorrow.

At the end of the session, I gathered my things and left the room. Despite polarised windows, the corridor outside the room was still bight enough for me to have to momentarily shield my eyes.

“Careful,” a man said, his voice smooth and confident.

I cried out in surprise, turned and caught the man’s arm with my briefcase. His cup spilled out of his hand and onto the floor. With feline speed, he jumped back so as not to get wet.

Lunging for the cup, I lost my footing and fell to my knees along with my belongings. “I’m so sorry!”

“Please, no need to apologise,” he said, crouching to help me. I noticed the same phrase the android had used earlier, delivered in the same reassuring tone.

Moments later, a cleaning droid had wiped the floor, leaving us to stand face to face. Not knowing what to say, I smiled at him and he smiled back. Neither of us spoke. I decided he was very handsome.

“I’m Dylan,” he said at last. “Dylan Modell. I’m so very pleased to meet you.” He held out his hand.

I looked down at it. It was a strong, tanned, beautifully manicured hand. My heart sank. I didn’t want to put my pale hand with it’s nail-bitten fingers into Dylan’s but felt compelled to do so. I introduced myself and rubbed my damp palm on my thigh before we shook hands.

Dylan beamed at me. “I was thinking that as we’re both new to the city we could go exploring?”

I smiled compulsively and nodded before trotting behind him as he strode down to the atrium and out through the doors into City Seven.

Oh, God, I thought. He’s gorgeous. Will this day get any worse?

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A sense of place

Blue stoneYesterday, I spent an hour in a lunatic asylum.

Admittedly, it was a Victorian hospital which has now been converted into luxury apartments but it had a real sense of place.

The Orcadian Novels will climax in Orkney so when I’m there next month I’ll be paying attention to my feelings toward the islands as well as the feelings of those around me. It’s not all about looking at maps and pictures while I’m sitting at my computer 500 miles away. What’s the community like? What’s the culture like? How have people adapted to the landscape?

All these things will illuminate my sense of Orkney as a place and give my characters their own unique perspective.

As for the asylum, lock me up and throw away the key – that place has stories just waiting to be told!

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For the love of it

Heart shaped balloonSpirit of Water is half . . . what?

Half finished?

Half started?

The writing is slowing down. The panic is rising.

People are waiting for this book.

People are asking for this book.

You know those times when you look at your life—your real life—and long to be a child again, when the most difficult task you faced was tying your shoelaces? That’s how I’ve been feeling.

When I was writing my first novel, Body of Water, it seemed so easy. I had all the time in the world. I had no editor to schedule time with and no readers waiting. Very few people knew the story even existed.

Memory of Water was a relatively relaxed affair, too. I hadn’t intended to write a sequel, let alone a trilogy, so I enjoyed unhooking from the online world and spending five glorious weeks working with developmental editor Victoria Mixon who helped me cut through the fatty pads caused by National Novel Writing Month’s overindulgence and uncover the beating heart of the story. Five months of rewrites followed. It was hard work but it was bliss.

Things have been feeling different with the last book in The Orcadian Novels, like I’m holding the celestial spheres on my shoulders. I have to get this right. I have to get it right for me and the readers but, most of all, I have to get it right for the characters.

Hang on. Who?

The characters. Those poor souls I’ve been torturing for the last two novels need some closure. Sure, it’s not going to be an easy ride but they need their Happy For Now, if not a Happy Ever After. Dom needs to find Leven, Leven and Lorcan need to find themselves, and everyone needs to find Beth. The characters are why I need to keep turning up to write.

Like my editor said: “it’s time to kick into even harder, deeper, more profound gear.”

And I’ll give it my passion and commitment but, most of all, I’ll give it my love.

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What I Say . . . About Chicks with Dicks

damselindistress_flickrCCI’m over at L.C.’s blog today, talking about the term “chicks with dicks”.

What do you think? Acceptable criticism or offensive shorthand?

Come and join the conversation!

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Sex: Yes, yes, yes! No, no!

iStock_000000344677XSmallLong story short: I’m back on Goodreads.

Long story long: Once upon a time, I lost my mojo.

Now, I know how to write a sex scene. In all the stories I wrote in my teens and twenties, most consisted of a bit of context wrapped around an extended sex scene. Some were written in eye-watering detail and, looking back, others read more like furniture assembly instructions.

When I first drafted Body of Water there were four sex scenes. (Three made it into the published version.) Isali Dreams was equally raunchy, and I also wrote The Elements of Love for an M/M Romance Goodreads anthology which involved a steamy threesome. Sure enough, it was a popular read.

Then everything changed.

When I came to write Memory of Water, I was in a place in where sex was the last thing on my mind. (I was fortunate in that Shaun, the lead character, was pretty much in the same place. The two sex scenes I started were cut short by dramatic events. Sex didn’t drive Shaun but regret and longing did.)

At the same time as writing Memory of Water I offered to write another story for the Goodreads group based on a picture of men in a shower. I thought the story I’d crafted was an inspired piece, illustrating the damage an insatiable sex drive can do to a man’s psyche. The lead character had done terrible things to cover up his indiscretions and paid the ultimate price for it.

I submitted it with pride.

They hated it.

It didn’t get published.

I was so mortified I cancelled my Goodreads account. Something had gone very, very wrong. I’d allowed my inner prude—or was it delusions of literary grandeur?—to censor my duty to give the people what they want.

Why am I telling you this? Well, I signed back up to Goodreads today, and re-joined the M/M Romance group. When the next anthology comes around, I’m going to give them the sexy they’ve been waiting for.

You can find me on Goodreads here.

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The Other Way is Essex

towieBack in 2010, I co-founded a writing group called Writebulb.

As with many writing groups, there was a turnover of members—including me—but the the group has evolved to the point where they’ve published their first anthology, and they invited me to write the introduction!

The Other Way is Essex is now available on Amazon. I’d encourage you to buy it not only because it’s good but also because it supports the Farleigh Hospice charity.

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Take the time to be creative

I’ve started working on a story with my partner.

It started innocently enough, with one of those “I have an idea” comments dropped into a conversation about writing. (It’s his idea, not mine.)

Like so many story ideas, he had the bare bones and that was good enough for now, but it wasn’t until I started asking him questions over lunch about the setting, the people in it, what struggles they face, the historical background, and so on, that he was able to focus his attention on the two people who’ve been knocking around in his head.

When we got home, we started writing ideas down, debating character motivation, and checking historical facts. We discussed the characters’ lives, their relationships, and attitudes.

We made story decisions.

As the conversation continued, and the story took shape, my partner became more and more animated. I could see in him the feeling I now take for granted in myself: the creative process feels exciting.

He’d be the first person to say “I’m not creative” but I disagree. I think we’re all creative.

We just have to let it breathe.

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New places to buy my books

Barnes-&-NobleFollowing a period of Amazon exclusivity, I’m pleased to announce that my books are now available from Barnes & Noble, kobo, and Copia.

Click the names above to be taken to the appropriate pages on each store.

I’ll also announce when they become available on the iBookstore and Sony.

Thank you for your support – I’m very grateful!

Stu :)

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Behind the scenes: Leven’s character profile

While working with my developmental editor on Memory of Water, I was asked to develop character profiles for all the main characters, and I thought I’d share Leven’s with you. If you haven’t already read the first novel, Body of Water, then I’d suggest you read no further otherwise important plot points will be spoiled!

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